Post by ☁ Monte ☁ on Aug 11, 2016 2:40:05 GMT
After realizing ways the original plot was flawed, I decided to redo the plot
The Main Plot
Almene is a normal eastern dragon.
That is, until a series of unfortunate events killed him.
Thousands of years later, a young yet skilled alchemist stumbled upon his hidden remains.
This alchemist did not know who he would become, for they were to revive the skeleton
Soon Al would become their favorite servant, deciding they wanted even more out of him
They visited a well-known 'mind maker', ordering them to craft them a heart
The mind maker warned the young one to be careful with the large red heart
Without thought, the alchemist placed the red heart inside of Almene's chest, where it hovered there
Grass would become black, shimmering sand and swirl around Almene, covering his bones and his red heart
After he had finished being covered by sand, the sandy dragon tripled in size
In once empty sockets laid blood red swirling eyes
Looking down at his former master, Al grinned and displayed large, red teeth
Then he killed him
Yugure will be next
And Almene knew exactly how he would do it
The Main Plot
Almene is a normal eastern dragon.
That is, until a series of unfortunate events killed him.
Thousands of years later, a young yet skilled alchemist stumbled upon his hidden remains.
This alchemist did not know who he would become, for they were to revive the skeleton
Soon Al would become their favorite servant, deciding they wanted even more out of him
They visited a well-known 'mind maker', ordering them to craft them a heart
The mind maker warned the young one to be careful with the large red heart
Without thought, the alchemist placed the red heart inside of Almene's chest, where it hovered there
Grass would become black, shimmering sand and swirl around Almene, covering his bones and his red heart
After he had finished being covered by sand, the sandy dragon tripled in size
In once empty sockets laid blood red swirling eyes
Looking down at his former master, Al grinned and displayed large, red teeth
Then he killed him
Yugure will be next
And Almene knew exactly how he would do it
