Post by sharahphina on Dec 2, 2015 0:19:21 GMT
Hello, I hope you don't mind I thougfht I'd post one page from my book, tell me if ypu eant me to post more, OR just take it out of this thread . Also this is a page from book three, I think you can understand it (Book one and two are not on this computer) So, tell me what you think. also PLEASE DUN STEAL! or I will sue you (JK.. pleas dun)
There was a flash of light in a place called the crystal forrest, where gaint trees with allmost cherry blossoms and blue grass. Where deer were the main sorce of food in that land, where,well, there usually wasn't much interruption, until a frisky kitty came with the name of Robinhood, and happened to stir up some trouble,which was of his nature. And well, moments later were back!
Robin groaned, “That certainly was a exsperince!” He replied as he got up from where he was lying on charred looking ground. As he gazed around looking ffor one of his friends he spotted Garreth. Aswell as Sharahphina who was laying on Garreths side, “Hey, bud! Can you still see?” Robin inquirred curiously as he walked froward to the grey and red wolf, “Uh... Let me check, no.” He replied dryly. Sharah rolled over, “Ow... I wonder if it hurst so much becouse I fell through a roof?” She questioned as she pulled her lip back in a hiss, her scruff rising as she got up gimgerly. Garreth got up, shaking off his fur, “ I am quiet surprised I could see in the. uh.. world?” He commented.
Robin nodded as he licked down his fur and looked at his surroundings, his ears flicking back and forth, “Me aswell, good friend.” He replied distractedly, “Where is Willow?” He replied atlast his brow furrowed and muscles tense as he began walking around the area, “ I was right by her and then...” He trailed off. Sharaphina rraised her eyebrows, “Whats up lovebird, think she ran away from you?” She mewed sarcasticly as she padded about, “Ah, I think I have a bruise about everywhere.” Robin turned around with a hiss, “You kknow, I think we've all about gotten tired of your smart mouth!”
There was a flash of light in a place called the crystal forrest, where gaint trees with allmost cherry blossoms and blue grass. Where deer were the main sorce of food in that land, where,well, there usually wasn't much interruption, until a frisky kitty came with the name of Robinhood, and happened to stir up some trouble,which was of his nature. And well, moments later were back!
Robin groaned, “That certainly was a exsperince!” He replied as he got up from where he was lying on charred looking ground. As he gazed around looking ffor one of his friends he spotted Garreth. Aswell as Sharahphina who was laying on Garreths side, “Hey, bud! Can you still see?” Robin inquirred curiously as he walked froward to the grey and red wolf, “Uh... Let me check, no.” He replied dryly. Sharah rolled over, “Ow... I wonder if it hurst so much becouse I fell through a roof?” She questioned as she pulled her lip back in a hiss, her scruff rising as she got up gimgerly. Garreth got up, shaking off his fur, “ I am quiet surprised I could see in the. uh.. world?” He commented.
Robin nodded as he licked down his fur and looked at his surroundings, his ears flicking back and forth, “Me aswell, good friend.” He replied distractedly, “Where is Willow?” He replied atlast his brow furrowed and muscles tense as he began walking around the area, “ I was right by her and then...” He trailed off. Sharaphina rraised her eyebrows, “Whats up lovebird, think she ran away from you?” She mewed sarcasticly as she padded about, “Ah, I think I have a bruise about everywhere.” Robin turned around with a hiss, “You kknow, I think we've all about gotten tired of your smart mouth!”